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Dante Xavier

Sat Feb 8, 2003, 10:03 AM
He lies in his bed at night thinking of her and as he clutches the sheets closer to him he wishes for her presence. But in reality he knows that it'll never happen and so he lies there and fantasizes in his dark room under his grey covers as he listens to the police sirens in the distance. The get increasingly louder and then fade out into the distance. He closes his eyes to blind himself from this reality but he knows that it wont work. "Just because you can't see something does not mean it's not there," he wispers to himself.

He remembers how she played with his head. Misleading him into thinking that she would ever like him. He felt special because of the things she told him and never stopped to think whether she would easily say the same to others. He was the type who craved for attention and that was the one thing everyone used against him. Give him a little attention and you'll have him in your pocket in no time at all. He tossed and turned in bed as he turned this over in his mind.

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:iconspyed:
Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?

What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.

You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.

I offer only the truth, nothing more.

Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill

Fella Point Right spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
Ninja Point Right I know. That's why it's going to work.

Do not try and bend the spoon ...

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:iconsixthreeone:
Thank you for the vote on [link]

Much appreciated. :) (Smile)
:icongomen:
Heya, thanks for the comment, I'm glad you like it. Sorry for the late reply tho!!

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Jealousy.
:iconnz:
//your comment, and fav, and devwatch are all much, much appreciated. thank you. it made my day. ill be writing some more now. thanks again.
-nz


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:iconvocalpoetix:
Hi,

Thank you for your very nice comment about my poem! Yeah, I very rarely write using rhyme.. I did put a little bit at the end of the poem, because i wanted those two stanzas to sound like the 'chorus' of past lovers.. Thank you again!
:icontorture-chamber:
Thank you for the comment :) (Smile) hee, I especially liked the whole *2x4 in the face* part. I wandered through your work, and I must say it's impressive. I'll definately be back in hopes of more.

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"You know, these clothes do not fancy you at all. It should be a dress or nothing. I happen to have no dress in my cabin." - Jack Sparrow
:iconbeyondlight:
thank you for reading my "breathing lessons". I'm glad you liked it... and thank you for your great comment!!!
:iconnz:
//rhyme was of no importance. hm, i wrote this while feeling incredibly mad (crazy, but crazy sounds foolish) therefore the real substance of the poem was a surreal description of some weird thing, and not its literary beauty.
-nz

p.s.: i´ll go and read your poems.

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:iconmariusanimus:
Two good poems, sir. Your poetic techniques like alliteration show much skill. ^,~ I want to see more.
:iconnathanyel:
thanks for the comment, cool style to comment ;) (Wink)

oh, thanks for noting me an error: I acutally wanted to write "lurking" instead of "luring" ;) (Wink)

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